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两幅图写法
1. 一句话点题：点到为止，绝不展开It goes without saying that the drawing (picture/cartoon/photo) aims at revealing (illustrating/mirroring/displaying) a common and serious (current/thought-provoking:正面) problem (issue正面) : 1) how to deal with/control/curb the trend of … 2) it is important for us to do… 3) 问题实质, especially, 由大到小缩小范围。
2. 承上启下，可有可无let’s take a closer look at the drawing(s).
3. 一句话描写第一幅图：1）in the first (left) picture, 主语+动作 2)主语+in the first picture+动作 3) according to the first picture, 主语+动作
4. 一句话描写第二幅图，前面加转折连词：however/on the contrary/whereas/while, in the second picture, 主语+动作 (注：当两幅图主语一样的话，建议第四句话中加一个when引导的时间状语从句，显示主语在图画中的变化)
5. 最后一句话总结，停留在图画的表层结构：it is obvious/apparent/evident that, obviously, the trend is clear: 1)直接翻译图画文字说明；2)总结提炼 （注：该句主语一定是图画中的主语，语言可简单）
一幅图写法：
1、2、5句相同
3、4句不同：两句话抓住图画中两到三个采分点 （注：图画中人物对象的表情是其中重要的采分点；不用关注细节；常用表达词语：with短语；连接词：Moreover）
图中图写法：
1、2、5句相同
3、4句不同：第三句：描写现实的图画；第四句：描写虚拟的图画
两句之间的套话：however, in the主语’s mind appears a scene in which
常用表达词语: 变成：become/turn out to be/ transform into 想象：imagine
图表作文的写法：
1、2句相同
3、4、5句不同：
四大主力句型
第5句：an observer can easily find the connections between the two.
第二段
原因分析：
原因句与拓展句之间的关系：1）因果关系：in this way/consequently/thus/therefore; 2)解释说明：that is to say/in other words; 3) 举例论证：for example/ take sb for example; 4)数据论证：according to a report released by the United Nations, there are…
6. 第二段主题句：Why does this phenomenon appear? From my point of view, there are at least several possible reasons to explain this 形容词(sad/tragic/) situation.
7. 第一条原因：in the first place, due to/with/because of/since +名词词组, it is almost inevitable for people to do …
8. 第一条原因的拓展句：in this way
9. 第二条原因：secondly/in addition, 后果、情况as a result of/due to/原因
10. 第二条原因的拓展句：according to a report released by the United Nations, there are…
11. 如果有第三条原因：
12. 第三条原因的拓展句：this dramatic change causes….
13. 第二段结尾点题：there is no denying that, therefore, …should be responsible for this sad situation.
举例论证：
6．第二段主题句：the people（可换） in the cartoon represents/symbolizes those who…
剩下几句强烈建议使用正反举例法，这样才能有虚有实，字数才能写够：
7. on the one hand, I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the fact …1)of…2)that…
8. on the other hand, if one ….
9. The list of such examples can go on and on.
中间空缺句子是没有模板而言的。
第三段
请参照“末段五步走”写法
14. 第三段主题句：this social phenomenon(推荐具体化) may exert/produce/yield a negative/adverse impact upon the development of our society as a whole, therefore, it is high time that we made concerted efforts to put an end to this situation. （注：如果文章主题是积极向上的，此句改为：to sum up, 对文章主题的升华，常用表达：promote, encourage, motivate）
15. 政府：the authorities concerned should assume responsibility for doing sth
16. 人们：we should realize the importance/significance of …
17. 我自己：
18. 最后点题：only in this way can we build a harmonious society. (注：建议此句应与文章主题挂钩)
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